tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post4699860357981213191..comments2023-12-05T03:34:14.680-05:00Comments on <b>Issa's Untidy Hut</b>: Chiron Review & an Albert Huffstickler MemorialIssa's Untidy Huthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-54644445003002791682009-08-13T07:02:19.400-04:002009-08-13T07:02:19.400-04:00Thanks Ed (always good to get a wakeup call), Jay ...Thanks Ed (always good to get a wakeup call), Jay (I'll check that Locklin out, I've got a couple of things of his here but not that one), and Charles ...<br /><br />Charles, I see what your saying. I'm thinking the repetitiveness in both poems is particularly geared towards reading them aloud ... giving them a rhythm, a hook. Since I'm getting ready to do my first public reading in over 20 years, it may be my attraction to these at this particular time ... though, obviously, I published them so I like them, traffic-jam of vowels and all.Issa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-89415092201386191792009-08-12T14:08:41.523-04:002009-08-12T14:08:41.523-04:00I really like the Don Winter one. I'm not sure...I really like the Don Winter one. I'm not sure about the first few. the repetition of opening letters, "u" and "e" doesn't do much for me.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-15620247031495378022009-08-12T10:51:00.776-04:002009-08-12T10:51:00.776-04:00don
am also a fan of CR, and if you haven't, ...don<br /><br />am also a fan of CR, and if you haven't, read Locklin's Life Force Poems, a wonderful collection about and in reverence to the values and muses that help shape an artists body of work in a spiritual sense.<br /><br />also, hopefully Austin will get the Huffstickler memorial going..they seem a pretty progressive city in terms of music and such.John Grochalskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13150630637644393375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-75922498784281757902009-08-12T07:23:47.466-04:002009-08-12T07:23:47.466-04:00sit in your back-yard
,watch the grass
and...sit in your back-yard<br /> ,watch the grass<br /> and the weeds grow<br />: wait for something to happen...<br /><br /> something always doesEd Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11285310130024785775noreply@blogger.com