tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post5185500885886947532..comments2023-12-05T03:34:14.680-05:00Comments on <b>Issa's Untidy Hut</b>: Bob Carlton & Charlie Mehrhoff: Wednesday Haiku, #128Issa's Untidy Huthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-80832174076708418412013-08-15T14:34:23.956-04:002013-08-15T14:34:23.956-04:00Nice one, Terri ... a couple more holes in the lid...Nice one, Terri ... a couple more holes in the lid maybe?Issa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-7701900909158371162013-08-15T14:33:51.871-04:002013-08-15T14:33:51.871-04:00Cheers, Alan ... all are particularly strong ...Cheers, Alan ... all are particularly strong ...Issa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-17651675144602951182013-08-14T17:19:24.510-04:002013-08-14T17:19:24.510-04:00firefly
in a Mason jar
fading
enjoyed!firefly<br />in a Mason jar<br />fading<br /><br />enjoyed!Terri L. Frenchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10421007691175026619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-56106252224126898122013-08-14T16:16:21.600-04:002013-08-14T16:16:21.600-04:00Delightful to see a trio of firefly haiku!
Bob Ca...Delightful to see a trio of firefly haiku!<br /><br />Bob Carlton's verse is fun using an elipsis in a concrete approach.<br /><br />I love Charlie Mehrhoff's concluding "an echo of the sun," brilliant!<br /><br />And David Lanoue's translation is masterful, uncaught, then uncaught again, catching the spirit of the fireflies. Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!<br /><br />Alan, With WordsArea 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com