tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post7162005740563300368..comments2023-12-05T03:34:14.680-05:00Comments on <b>Issa's Untidy Hut</b>: Pranav Kodial & Ken Sawitri: Wednesday Haiku, #159Issa's Untidy Huthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-77909778484697489762014-05-31T08:40:23.833-04:002014-05-31T08:40:23.833-04:00Hot peppers!
Cheers, Ken, best to you.
DonHot peppers!<br /><br />Cheers, Ken, best to you.<br /><br />DonIssa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-25704619224386401132014-05-30T22:08:14.396-04:002014-05-30T22:08:14.396-04:00Glad seeing my humble work in 'Wednesday Haiku...Glad seeing my humble work in 'Wednesday Haiku'! Thank you and my respect to Daryl, Poorni, Pranav, Gilena, PK, and Don, for guiding into this beautiful haiku gathering.. <br /><br />tiny little things--<br />look!<br />Edo's hot peppers<br /><br />Issa<br />translated by David G. Lanoue<br /><br />a bow,<br />KeNKen Sawitrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12644890259985891984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-12297132498264869612014-05-20T15:47:17.546-04:002014-05-20T15:47:17.546-04:00Pranav:
Thanks for the kind note - the comments,...Pranav: <br /><br />Thanks for the kind note - the comments, I believe, speak volumes. You will have to shed that neophyte label, my friend.<br /><br />DonIssa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-86658414538082858452014-05-20T12:34:12.749-04:002014-05-20T12:34:12.749-04:00Dear Don, thanks so much for considering my poem w...Dear Don, thanks so much for considering my poem worth publishing. <br />It is my greatest privilege to find my little piece alongside the beautifully imaged ku written by Ken. <br /><br />And thank you everyone for your kind words and feedback. It is encouragement from readers and poets like you that makes neophytes like me to strive harder. :) <br />Warm regards.Pranav Kodialnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-89451277927035101412014-05-16T12:03:48.273-04:002014-05-16T12:03:48.273-04:00Gillena:
Glad all three of these hit the mark.
...Gillena:<br /><br />Glad all three of these hit the mark. <br /><br />best,<br />DonIssa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-67510787323422640202014-05-16T06:50:13.685-04:002014-05-16T06:50:13.685-04:00The chiaroscuro in Pranav's haiku is stunning;...The chiaroscuro in Pranav's haiku is stunning; and, how can i not just luv the zen of Ken's haiku.<br /><br />This one of Issa's reading for the first time just fits the mood set by the first two; good choice<br /><br />much love... Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-67143275574319900492014-05-15T08:52:21.299-04:002014-05-15T08:52:21.299-04:00Thanks very much, PK. For those who don't know...Thanks very much, PK. For those who don't know and are curious about "zoka," see <a href="http://simplyhaikujournal.com/past-issues/summer-2012/features/zoka.html" rel="nofollow">Don Baird's article</a> at simply haiku. For yugen, <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Y%C5%ABgen#Y.C5.ABgen" rel="nofollow">check here</a>. DonIssa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-19991183950405049262014-05-15T08:41:07.601-04:002014-05-15T08:41:07.601-04:00Poorni, glad you liked.
Poorni, glad you liked.<br />Issa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-26825974239429137102014-05-15T08:40:57.776-04:002014-05-15T08:40:57.776-04:00Cheers, Daryl.Cheers, Daryl.Issa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-66066432274836301732014-05-14T21:13:43.190-04:002014-05-14T21:13:43.190-04:00Lovely haiku. Pranav used 'ku' in an aesth...Lovely haiku. Pranav used 'ku' in an aesthetic style.'last load' haiku by Ken is an expression of classical innovation and creativity.Ken's imagism incorporating 'zoka', and 'yugen' in the haiku is highly appreciative. P K Padhyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00459318479754229231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-49094502727479807192014-05-14T13:45:36.903-04:002014-05-14T13:45:36.903-04:00wow...lovely ones :)wow...lovely ones :)poornihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07356374972600717682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-37883221027405864832014-05-14T13:42:58.801-04:002014-05-14T13:42:58.801-04:00awesome!awesome!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14362522798786400961noreply@blogger.com