tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post7822610764020241097..comments2023-12-05T03:34:14.680-05:00Comments on <b>Issa's Untidy Hut</b>: Jeff Hanson & Ronald Baatz: Wednesday Haiku, Week 56Issa's Untidy Huthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-8895246226186761402012-02-23T15:14:39.739-05:002012-02-23T15:14:39.739-05:00speaking towards that dew drop:
been re-into Dōge...speaking towards that dew drop:<br /><br />been re-into Dōgen's 'moon in a dewdrop'<br /><br />actually began with the poems near the end... & worked backwards..<br /><br />those Tanahashi / Whalen & the Tanahashi / Unger<br /><br />translations...<br /><br />&, anyboddhi know this Brian Unger ? I think I just might... name is familiar.<br /><br />great 'stuff' Life = Art/Poetry, eh ?Ed Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11285310130024785775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-89670809409126464152012-02-23T09:46:11.394-05:002012-02-23T09:46:11.394-05:00There's something so incredible about dew.There's something so incredible about dew.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-4512091229485071562012-02-23T07:07:56.556-05:002012-02-23T07:07:56.556-05:00Tom,
Yes, there is such sound in all three of th...Tom, <br /><br />Yes, there is such sound in all three of these, sound as tone, as I mentioned above. <br /><br />Now, of course, I'm curious about how snails hear.<br /><br /><a href="http://animals.about.com/od/mollusks/ig/World-of-Snails/Snail-2.htm" rel="nofollow"> And 'here' it is</a> ...<br /><br />DonIssa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-27893638260591051532012-02-23T06:58:28.007-05:002012-02-23T06:58:28.007-05:00Rachael -
Thanks very much - yes, they are somet...Rachael - <br /><br />Thanks very much - yes, they are something of a match - Jeff's catches the richness of resonance that isn't - the essential core of haiku, I'd say.<br /><br />Ronald Baatz just is always amazing. The evocation of sound here is just beautiful because sound is somehow instantly tone (not that does resonate) - could this really be only 5 words long?<br /><br />DonIssa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-41587742918291538872012-02-23T06:55:23.019-05:002012-02-23T06:55:23.019-05:00Some fine insights on the rain.
woman bathing r...Some fine insights on the rain.<br /><br /><br /><br />woman bathing roadside buffaloes-<br />we too <br />get wet!adityahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16078144194220301083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-19846080464386158032012-02-23T03:57:33.406-05:002012-02-23T03:57:33.406-05:00All I can say, Don, is
drip
drip
drip...
[tiny...All I can say, Don, is<br /><br />drip<br /><br />drip<br /><br />drip...<br /><br />[tiny splash, heard only by a newborn snail, nosing about in the mud]TChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05915822857461178942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-80184938305371538032012-02-22T17:11:01.137-05:002012-02-22T17:11:01.137-05:00The first one autumn rain.. has a philosophical fe...The first one autumn rain.. has a philosophical feel to it.<br /><br />The second conveys a great sense of stillness. Rachael StanleyRachael Stanleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09890558579053212319noreply@blogger.com