tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post2897745752769774322..comments2023-12-05T03:34:14.680-05:00Comments on <b>Issa's Untidy Hut</b>: Wednesday Haiku, #23: Cherie Hunter DayIssa's Untidy Huthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-26935621355150714772011-07-02T08:25:12.484-04:002011-07-02T08:25:12.484-04:00Thanks much, Mark, glad you enjoyed it. And Charl...Thanks much, Mark, glad you enjoyed it. And Charles, there might be another poem there ...Issa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-47300706412988036652011-07-02T08:01:40.696-04:002011-07-02T08:01:40.696-04:00I really enjoy the poignancy of Cherie Hunter Day&...I really enjoy the poignancy of Cherie Hunter Day's haiku. The balance of late winter and the lingering presence of the playground bully feels just right. - MarkAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-6417384263700630042011-06-29T12:43:49.640-04:002011-06-29T12:43:49.640-04:00The little chick looks a bit lonely on the playgro...The little chick looks a bit lonely on the playground.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-86044342475154487302011-06-29T08:58:01.791-04:002011-06-29T08:58:01.791-04:00Mary:
Thanks very much - this type of conversatio...Mary:<br /><br />Thanks very much - this type of conversation puts the modern poet's work in a big picture perspective ...<br /><br />A little like Issa's poem about seeing the Milky Way through a tear in a curtain ...<br /><br />DonIssa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-21930121998671286712011-06-29T08:55:53.747-04:002011-06-29T08:55:53.747-04:00Kokkie-san:
Found this piece at the Library of Co...Kokkie-san:<br /><br />Found this piece at the Library of Congress picture site ... I'll investigate to see if there are more. <br /><br />Lovely little ku, too, my friend.Issa's Untidy Huthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07352841590717991698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-11166272062876391842011-06-29T07:46:41.434-04:002011-06-29T07:46:41.434-04:00Love the word link and juxtaposition between the p...Love the word link and juxtaposition between the poems – almost like a dialogue between poets parted by the centuries.Mary Saylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08709628386233742459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5849270578857708223.post-46329536741753806232011-06-29T07:36:17.646-04:002011-06-29T07:36:17.646-04:00far beyond water's edge
some flower
picking in...far beyond water's edge<br />some flower<br />picking in her reveries<br /><br /><br />maybe "she" is.... Chrysanthemum <br /><br />this delightful piece just must be beginning element of one of Harunobu's Shunga instruction series<br /><br /><br /><br />K.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com