Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Merrill Ann Gonzales & Kala Ramesh: Wednesday Haiku, Week 72

Photo by Derek Ramsey


sprig of hope
hiding somewhere
this early spring

      Merrill Ann Gonzales





Photo by Gary Halvorson, Oregon State Archives





a yellow breeze
ruffles the hill's outline
summer grass 
Kala Ramesh





 Hunting for Bamboo Shoots by Utagawa Kuniyoshi




 
my spring--
a bit of bamboo
and a willow sprig
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue




 
best,
Don

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12 comments:

  1. Lovely haiku. Fine pairing and Issa too! Andrea

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  2. warm winds and mellow grace, Don, thanks. Except "Hunting for Bamboo Sprouts"... that captures the essence of cold! Thanks again.

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  3. Thanks a ton, Don.
    You use the 'montage'(film making) effect well — within this haiku genre.
    I like the beginning ku with spring passing into summer and back to Issa's spring.

    The passing of the year compressed within three haiku poems :)

    Thanks for including my work.
    _kala

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  4. Thanks, Andrea. Bowing to Issa, and all.

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  5. Nice to dip the toes in icy spring water on a sweltering day.

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  6. Kala ... serendipity makes things happen ... I did try to catch the transitions once I was nudged in that direction (by the works) - thanks for you fine words again.

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  7. Stunning to find my haiku on such a insightful page... I am deeply honored to be in all of your company

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  8. Beautiful - the haiku,the everything.
    Thanks for the pleasure.
    Mary

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  9. Merrill:

    The honor is all ours, your readers.

    Don

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