Photo by Derek Ramsey
sprig of hope
hiding somewhere
this early spring
Merrill Ann Gonzales
Photo by Gary Halvorson, Oregon State Archives
a yellow breeze
ruffles the hill's outline
summer grass
Kala Ramesh
Hunting for Bamboo Shoots by Utagawa Kuniyoshi
my spring--
a bit of bamboo
and a willow sprig
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue
best,
Don
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Lovely haiku. Fine pairing and Issa too! Andrea
ReplyDeletewarm winds and mellow grace, Don, thanks. Except "Hunting for Bamboo Sprouts"... that captures the essence of cold! Thanks again.
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton, Don.
ReplyDeleteYou use the 'montage'(film making) effect well — within this haiku genre.
I like the beginning ku with spring passing into summer and back to Issa's spring.
The passing of the year compressed within three haiku poems :)
Thanks for including my work.
_kala
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Beautiful landscapes
ReplyDeleteThanks, Andrea. Bowing to Issa, and all.
ReplyDeleteNice to dip the toes in icy spring water on a sweltering day.
ReplyDeleteKala ... serendipity makes things happen ... I did try to catch the transitions once I was nudged in that direction (by the works) - thanks for you fine words again.
ReplyDeleteCheers, Charles.
ReplyDeleteStunning to find my haiku on such a insightful page... I am deeply honored to be in all of your company
ReplyDeleteBeautiful - the haiku,the everything.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the pleasure.
Mary
Merrill:
ReplyDeleteThe honor is all ours, your readers.
Don
Mary:
ReplyDeleteThanks so much ...