Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Bart Solarcyzk & Chen-ou Liu: Wednesday Haiku, #226

Photo by Walter A. Aue


going  back
    to say goodbye
                 tomorrow
     Bart Solarcyzk 
 
 

Photo by Vern


summer's end
my footprints in the sand
a little deeper

     Chen-ou Liu


 Photo by davebloggs007



tomorrow morning
a humdrum river beach again?
summer moon
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2016 at 8:36 AM

    I like the dizzying of tenses in and through each haiku.

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  2. BartFebruary 17, 2016 at 12:15 PM

    Thanks Don. Caught this a week late. Always a pleasure.

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  3. P K PadhyMarch 26, 2016 at 6:12 AM

    Chen has composed a beautiful haiku with zoko and karumi. The implied 'kireji' portrays a silent pause interweaving both the images and rendering aesthetic feeling.

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