John Martone's book, a skeleton key, is a symbiotic combination of word and image. Both are by the poet himself, image every bit as stunning as word. There is much I could say about this work, but I must demure and let the work largely speak for itself.
a skeleton deer come to comfort you
This is no desku; the brilliant white bone, the whiteness of death confronting you like no other whiteness.
Confronts you?
Comforts you?
see thru
deer
eye-
sockets
&
hear
that freight
train
New meaning is given here to sight, to sound - do you see it, do you hear it?
far
from rest
deer's
pelvis
snagged
in root
One of the great virtues of the short poem, the haiku-like poem, is its engagement with the reader, demanding that the work be completed by another - this, for me, is a novel in 8 words.
all this
time
you too
dis
arti
cu
lating
Ah, now here is another layer of story, a veil seen through to an other meaning - here is the key, right before you - do you know which door it fits precisely?
seagulls circle
hominid crouches
skeleton deer
Closer, closer, closer still ...
Still ...
winter gusting
thru skeleton deer
nothing at all
Still.
skeleton deer
crawdad hole
skeleton deer
muskrat lodge
skeleton deer
beaver dam
skeleton deer
warbler's nest
heron nest
redwing nest
squirrel nest
skeleton deer
skeleton deer
& all gone home
You can hear it now, can't you? It's singing to you, it might be a little nursery rhyme, a bit of a jump rope jingle, something of a truism deeper and more profound than words themselves?
skeleton deer
now a trillion
invisible lives
A trillion lives ... seems almost just a handful, really. Find this intriguing? Want to read the whole thing? Mr. Martone has loaded skeleton key up on scribd, so just click on through. But bring your A game ...
... not the poetry one. The Other one.
Oh, by the way, skeleton key was shortlisted and received an Honorable Mention for this year's Haiku Foundation Touchstone Distinguished Books Award. So, really, give it a go.
I think Bashō would be proud.
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the deer's flute playing
off-key...
song in the night
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue
best,
Don
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4 comments:
John tends towards
picking the bones down
to their essence - masterfully
and then freely gives things away
And where might Martone’s words end and yours begin?
As always, the minimal gestures which compose your ‘reviews’ are as enlightening as the chosen selections.
Perfect, Ed.
Brian ... I'm very grateful for your kind review of these 'reviews." Cheers. Don
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