Photo by Walter A. Aue
going back
to say goodbye
tomorrow
Bart Solarcyzk
Photo by Vern
summer's end
my footprints in the sand
a little deeper
Chen-ou Liu
Photo by davebloggs007
tomorrow morning
a humdrum river beach again?
summer moon
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue
best,
Don
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3 comments:
I like the dizzying of tenses in and through each haiku.
Thanks Don. Caught this a week late. Always a pleasure.
Chen has composed a beautiful haiku with zoko and karumi. The implied 'kireji' portrays a silent pause interweaving both the images and rendering aesthetic feeling.
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