Showing posts with label Haiku. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Haiku. Show all posts

Wednesday, August 31, 2016

Dan Franch & Elmedin Kadric:
Wednesday Haiku, #230




Two-faced moon,
I thought I
knew better

Dan Franch



 Photo by ardfile


sunset...
the same color
loneliness

Elmedin Kadric




 
it seems to wash
the summer mountains...
sunrise 
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don
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Sunday, August 7, 2016

The crane screeches, the cicada's cry: Deep Mystery in the Haiku of Bashō

Photo by Castlelass


In loving memory of the Jane Reichhold, who, among her many accomplishments, is her English language translation of 

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     The crane screeches:
At its voice
     The bashō will surely tear

                         Bashō
                         Translated by R. H. Blyth



In my morning reading (Haiku, v. 4, R. H. Blyth), I ran across the above Bashō poem which I didn't remember but which struck me immediately. It put me in mind of the more famous Bashō poem:


Quietness--
Sinking into the rocks,
A cicada's cry

        Bashō
        Translated by Makota Ueda


Some translations go so far as to say piercing the rock(s), which heightens the mystery inherent in the poem. What struck me here is the relationship between these two pieces, the first a touch more literal, the second, more famous poem, perhaps closer to the mystery.


And what of the mystery? The less said, the more realized? Perhaps the poems are each transcendent moments or, in this case, two moments sharing a certain otherness?


Thinking on these things, I took a break for breakfast, and began reading a review of a book on, believe or not, camping. In the book, as noted by the reviewer, the author made a rather a limp joke referencing one of Leonard Cohen's most famous verses:


Ring the bells that still can ring 
Forget your perfect offering 
There is a crack in everything 
That's how the light gets in. 


Bad joke or not, as so often happens in my morning reading, the bell rang ... again and again and again.


Leonard Cohen's "Anthem."






my cracked teacup
like Buddha on display...
plum blossoms

             Issa
             trans. by David G. Lanoue



best, 
Don

PS Click to learn how to contribute to Wednesday Haiku. Here you will find Jane Reichhold's contribution.

Tuesday, July 12, 2016

With a Deepening Presence Book Launch Party, Saturday, July 16th, & The Trouble with Poets, a Film by Tom Weber, Friday, July 15th


This Saturday, July 16th, at the Irma Freeman Center for Imagination, from 7:30 to 9:30, is the launch of With a Deepening Presence. Books will be available for purchase and signing. Presence will be sold at the special reading price of $8.

Reading will be Kristofer CollinsChristine Starkey, Che EliasScott Pyle, Rosaly Roffman, Bart Solarczyk, Bob Ziller and myself. Food and drinks (water, beer) will be provided. 

If you can't make it (or even if can), I'll be reading the night before at the screening of Tom Weber's film, The Trouble with Poets, at Pittsburgh Filmakers (477 Melwood Avenue, Pittsburgh), from 6:30 to 9:30 pm.

The Filmmakers reading will be a general overview of my work. The launch reading will focus on the new book and a raft of all new poems never performed before. So, two nights, two very different readings.

Hope to see you at one or the other, or both.




yanking a radish
taking a tumble ...
little boy

Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue

best,
Don

Wednesday, June 22, 2016

Gloria Jaguden & Dennis Garvey: Wednesday Haiku, #229




oval moon
its woman's face
waiting

Gloria Jaguden





 

daylight moon
wearing a shroud
for just this instant

Dennis Garvey




 


which of you owns
that red moon
children?

Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don
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Wednesday, May 18, 2016

Patrick Sweeney & Chen-ou Liu: Wednesday Haiku, #228




Chess between adepts
persimmons on
a leafless tree

Patrick Sweeney


Photo by Brendan Adkins



the whiteness
of a cold moon ...
you, slanted eyes

Chen-ou Liu



Photo by Joe Stump



in cherry blossom shade
there are even those
who hate this world

Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don
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Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Bart Solarcyzk & Chen-ou Liu: Wednesday Haiku, #226

Photo by Walter A. Aue


going  back
    to say goodbye
                 tomorrow
     Bart Solarcyzk 
 
 

Photo by Vern


summer's end
my footprints in the sand
a little deeper

     Chen-ou Liu


 Photo by davebloggs007



tomorrow morning
a humdrum river beach again?
summer moon

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, January 20, 2016

Sondra J. Bynes & Kalyana Hapsari: Wednesday Haiku, #225

Photo by Philip Chapman-Bell



he didn't leave a message--watching cottonwood fluff fall up
                                   Sondra J. Byrnes


Photo by Laura Lewis



candle light dinner 
lipstick on her wine glass 
glistens 
      Kalyana Hapsari


Photo by Kristy Hom


cotton fluff scatters--
little thicket, little shrine
little ditch
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Friday, December 11, 2015

James W. Hackett (I.M.): 4 Haiku


Recently, I've been re-reading the introduction to Cor van den Heuvel's The Haiku Anthology (3rd ed.) and, when it comes to English language haiku poets, it essentially begins with James W. Hackett and Nick Virgilio. Of course, there were others earlier, but these are two major poets at the beginning of what van den Heuvel speculates may someday be called 'the golden age' of English language haiku.  

This sent me back to a collection of his work, The Way of Haiku: an Anthology of Haiku Poems, Japan Publications, 1969. I read it a few years back and, as is customary when I read poetry books, I have a slip of paper inside that serves the dual function of bookmark and place where I note down the page of poems that are, for me, highlights.

The book is over 250 pages long, 3 haiku to a page, and my note sheet has lots and lots of poems marked. Often I will put a special mark - an asterick or check - next to a page for poems that moved we especially. So, I looked at these first and, of all things, 
a particular image/theme appeared and so here are 3 of the especially highlighted poems:

 Photo by Nebojsa Mladjenovic



Now that I have freed
  the butterfly from the web
    I feel uneasy.


The design that spins 
  the spider, allows him no rest
    until its done.




A long line of web
  loose at both ends, riding free
    on the summer breeze



Photo by Chris Sorge


Early on, Hackett received the imprimatur of haiku guru R. H. Blyth, who, in Hackett, saw the very real possibility for haiku in English. You will note that all the haiku are in the strict 5/7/5 form, with beginning caps and punctuation, as was the prevailing approach of the day.

And none seem worse for that. I could talk a bit about what attracted Hackett to this imagery (and me, as reader, to those images/themes in his work), but perhaps it best to leave the air of mystery.

After all, it is life, isn't it?

One other observation is that the poems are all focused exclusively on nature. "Now that I have freed" is a rare instance of the intrusion of the poet (or any other human) in Hackett's work. The last poem below does not have that intrusion, but in it, I feel, you can sense very real human emotion and, so, not surprisingly, for those of you who know we and my own approach, it is one of my favorites:


Left by the tide
   within a shallowing pool:
        a frantic minnow


Photo by Brad Smith


some stay behind
in the green leaves...
low tide crows
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Daryl Nielsen & Elizabeth Crocket: Wednesday Haiku, #224

 Illustration by Helen Stratton


evening image                    
on the lake’s surface
boy that still is

        Daryl Nielsen


Photo by G. dallorto

 

their headstone
whispering out loud

the news they'd want to hear
        Elizabeth Crocket




the lake is slowly
lost in mist...
evening falls

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Susan Diridoni & Vibeke Laier: Wednesday Haiku, #223

 Photo by Aedallou

 

sans pearls summer peaches
          Susan Diridoni


 

Photo by Mike McCaffrey



summer moon
how tenderly waves
touch paper boats

      Vibeke Laier







the katydid
in the paper bag...
still singing

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Ramesh Anand & Elmedin Kadric: Wednesday Haiku, #222

 

glow of light
from the hilltop hut –
shooting star

Ramesh Anand


 Photo by Martin Burns

rain song
the busker
sings along

Elmedin Kadric


Orpheus Pines by Heather Wizell



wafting through trees
a beggar's flute
a nightingale's song

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue


Photo by Dave Hamster



best,
Don

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Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Helen Buckingham & Laszlo Slomovits: Wednesday Haiku, #221

GIF image courtesy of NASA


Geminid night--          
another good one
dies

Helen Buckingham


Mephistoles from Gounod's Faust



opera —
even the bad guys
sing in tune

Laszlo Slomovits


Devil Priest by Matahei



a long night--
the devil in me
torments me

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Alexis Rotella & Kanchan Chatterjee: Wednesday Haiku, #220

Photo by Troy Mason


The things
he doesn't say
slow-growing ivy

Alexis Rotella


Photo by Ivo Ivov


summer noon. . .
even the woodpecker's pecking
sounds heavy

Kanchan Chatterjee


Photo by Inderjit Nijjer



geese flying south--
the ducks at the gate
cheer them on

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Rehn Kovacic & Matthew Moffett: Wednesday Haiku, #219

Image from Talshiarr



Picking up each seed
   the bird bows--
        backyard Buddha

Rehn Kovacic



Photo by Ross




beside themselves
beside the cracked-up pavement
daffodils

Matthew Moffett


Artwork by Hishida Shunso




still plum blossoms
my head, by itself
bows
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, August 5, 2015

Ida Frelinger & Susan Diridoni: Wednesday Haiku, #218


Image by Tom Simpson via foter




one day at a time
a duckling skids
into the no-wake zone

     Ida Frelinger




Photo by azut via foter



sprouting oaks fugue a welcome

               Susan Diridoni 





Photo by Paul Hudson via foter




my money sprouted wings
and flew away...
the year ends

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, July 8, 2015

DJ Garvey & Susan Constable: Wednesday Haiku, #216

Photo by Andrew Moore


evening chant -
sacred ibis in lines
of flight
DJ Garvey


 Photo by Jonathan Boeke


writer’s block
he asks what I think
about parsnips
Susan Constable


Artwork by Ted Silveira



over the big house
an excellent flight!
firefly
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, July 1, 2015

Chen-ou Liu & Daryl Nielsen: Wednesday Haiku, #215

Photo by April Schultz

 

the river
swollen with spring ...
her stretchmarks

Chen-ou Liu





honeysuckle
through an open window
mother’s last breath

Daryl Nielsen






high noon--
the reed thrush sings
to a silent river

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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