Wednesday Haiku, Week #30
lilac creek trilling all the hours
Susan Diridoni
downstream, the gate
to knowledge...
evening's red leaves
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue
best,
Don
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lilac creek trilling all the hours
Susan Diridoni
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue
4 comments:
"Trilling" is such a great word.
Like that, about the creek. Very fine. Exactly what it's doing. Sky Crick here goes more "borluka borluka borluka" at this time, less trilly, more clonkish and frogs.
Thanks for the lovely poems, guys.
PG/333
Charles, something about all those Ls in trilling and lilacs ... Don
Old 333 ...
borluka, borluka, borluka ... you should be writing for the Sky Crick Chamber of Commerece.
Thanks for the kind words.
Don
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