Detail of Fulling Cloth by Moonlight by Kōin Nagayama
in the kitchen
a spill of white
- full moonDiane Borsenik
Mum Show, 1919, Photographer unknown
Orange mums
stiff even to a
warm autumn breeze
John Stokes
Kiku zu
perfectly straight
if we let it be...
chrysanthemumIssa
translated by David G. Lanoue
best,
Don
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12 comments:
nicely done Diane and John!
The top pic reminds me of the cover of Robin Trower's Bridge of Sighs album
Don,
These lovely simplicities and symmetries sing to me silently... ssshh... mum's the word.
Borsenik's haiku is understated yet emotionally-effective.
Nicely done.
Chen-ou Liu
What a wonderful idea, Don, to present together the moon and chrysanthemums!
Beautiful haiku!
http://clevelandpoetics.blogspot.com/2012/02/cleveland-poets-haiku-in-lilliput.html
Thanks, Terri.
Charles, here's the cover you are talking about ...
Tom:
Ah, very nice ... thanks.
Glad you liked it, Chen-ou,
Vida:
You got what I was going for ... exactly.
Don
pottygok ... many thanks for passing the word and the instant review!
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