Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Rehn Kovacic & Marion Clarke: Wednesday Haiku, #98

Photo by Joe Myers




Bonding with a grackle,
     his loud call
  lacks translation.
Rehn Kovacic



 

Photo by Penywise





wet start ...
even the snail
stays indoors

Marion Clarke





 Artwork by Konen Uehara




"First snowfall, blah-blah"
they stay indoors
the fools
 Issa
 translated by David G. Lanoue 




best,
Don
   

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13 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wonderful haiku Rehn and Marion. Love them. Rachael

Issa's Untidy Hut said...

Thanks so much, Rachael. So happy you liked the work!

Brian said...

Your Issa choice gave me the first laugh of the day!

Charles Gramlich said...

For some reason I like grackles, though they are loud mouthed and rather obnoxious in some ways.

Eamon O C said...

Lovely, evocative pieces from both writers.

Rehn said...

Thank you Rechael. I appreciate your kind words.

Anonymous said...

Enjoyed these very much - we just had some grackles visit our feeders this week. Always liked their name - as a small child my son called them crackles.
Lovely photos, too. Thanks, Don.
Mary Ahearn

Issa's Untidy Hut said...

Glad you liked the Issa, Brian ... it's absolutely wonderful.

Issa's Untidy Hut said...

Grackles are a favorite of mine, too, Charles. They seem to just stand there ground ... something to be said for that. And then there is the sound ...

graaaccckllll

Issa's Untidy Hut said...

Eamon, Cheers, Eamon ...

Issa's Untidy Hut said...

Hats off, Rehn, to you and Marion.

Issa's Untidy Hut said...

Mary:

Crackles! I think that's right.

best,
Don

Anonymous said...

I've only just read the rest of the comments this morning. Thanks Eamon and thanks Don for taking your hat off! :)

marion