Photo by The Browniris
snow-clad Kanchenjunga
in its shadow
a tiny temple
Pranav Kodial
\last load
my son spreads his hand
to weigh the moon
Ken Sawitri
Woodblock by Kawase Hasui
mountain temple--
deep under snow
a bell
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue
best,
Don
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12 comments:
awesome!
wow...lovely ones :)
Lovely haiku. Pranav used 'ku' in an aesthetic style.'last load' haiku by Ken is an expression of classical innovation and creativity.Ken's imagism incorporating 'zoka', and 'yugen' in the haiku is highly appreciative.
Cheers, Daryl.
Poorni, glad you liked.
Thanks very much, PK. For those who don't know and are curious about "zoka," see Don Baird's article at simply haiku. For yugen, check here. Don
The chiaroscuro in Pranav's haiku is stunning; and, how can i not just luv the zen of Ken's haiku.
This one of Issa's reading for the first time just fits the mood set by the first two; good choice
much love...
Gillena:
Glad all three of these hit the mark.
best,
Don
Dear Don, thanks so much for considering my poem worth publishing.
It is my greatest privilege to find my little piece alongside the beautifully imaged ku written by Ken.
And thank you everyone for your kind words and feedback. It is encouragement from readers and poets like you that makes neophytes like me to strive harder. :)
Warm regards.
Pranav:
Thanks for the kind note - the comments, I believe, speak volumes. You will have to shed that neophyte label, my friend.
Don
Glad seeing my humble work in 'Wednesday Haiku'! Thank you and my respect to Daryl, Poorni, Pranav, Gilena, PK, and Don, for guiding into this beautiful haiku gathering..
tiny little things--
look!
Edo's hot peppers
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue
a bow,
KeN
Hot peppers!
Cheers, Ken, best to you.
Don
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