Showing posts with label John Martone. Show all posts
Showing posts with label John Martone. Show all posts

Wednesday, May 27, 2015

alter-world: old pajamas


What is it we ask of the modern short-form poet, the modern haiku poet? What do we want, what is necessary in a short poem?

What do we need?

To get close to an answer to any, or all, of these questions perhaps we should be asking most importantly: what do we ask of ourselves when it comes to poetry as readers and, for some, as poets?

Old Pajamas (aka Alan Segal) is an excellent poet working in short forms for whom form itself is mercurial, form is protean, form is content's shadow. Like contemporary masters Cid Corman, John Martone, and Charlie Mehrhoff, he knows where the lines are and chooses to dance over and amongst them.

For my two cents, Old Pajamas would be a candidate for inclusion in a second edition of Haiku in English, as would Ed Baker, another fine purveyor of 'shorties' as he is wont to call them on any given day, work don't fit any strict definition but is all heart and spirit and soul.

Is the pen name 'Old Pajamas' off-putting? Just think about the various pen-names of so many Japanese poets. Even the masters - Bashō's name means banana leaf or tree, Issa's cup-of-tea, Buson's midnight studio, and Shiki's cuckoo. 

As far as English goes, Old Pajamas sounds just fine to me. 

The new collection he sent along is a limited hardcover edition, 1 of 25 printed.The book is entitled alter-world and here are four of my favorites from it:


Photo by Hadi Fooladi

ah
the butterfly
not an actor



Photo by Amour Perdu


that you're in black
flower and scaly
while I'm paleness
blinking in the dark
is enough enough for us





in one cricket
the sound is weary



Photo by Seth Anderson


BLOWER MOTOR #4

mad with rust  / /  camellias in bloom




Regular readers of this blog will recognize this last poem (and photo) as having appeared previously on Wednesday Haiku

Looking at these four pieces superficially they seem to be all over the place, form-wise. Yet, there is a unifying element among them, one of the major components of traditional haiku.

All four are firmly ground in nature.

Now, arguments could certainly be had, one way or the other, as to which, if any, are haiku, and which are not. I have my opinions and I'll keep them (mostly) to myself. 

One thing I will say is that they are all haiku-like or, even more generally, fine brief poems.   

alter-world is not available to purchase, so there is no pitch here. However, you can find more of Alan's work, from alter-world and and other places, at old pajamas: from the dirt hutIt is definitely worth your while. There is also a more extensive review of an earlier collection, Drenched Through at Old Age, here.


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Photo by Mo


when will it become
a cricket's nest?
my white hair

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue




best,

Don

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Sunday, March 15, 2015

John Martone: a sailing book



John Martone never ceases to amaze and possibly the primary reason for this is that he never ceases to surprise, and be surprised.

As happens whenever one of John's books arrives in the mail, I look forward very much to reading and learning from one of the master poets of the short-short form. When I saw the title of this one, a sailing book, I thought, oh, this will be good fun. 

Really, I had no idea.

(If I might digress a moment ... I can see, or maybe I should say hear, you smiling, you long-suffering reader of this blog ... Still, I should mention by way of a disclaimer that, though I don't have much by way of sea legs, I did live in a bungalow right on the eastern edge of our drifting continent for over ten years.

So, really, I should have had some idea.

Thanks for your patience - digression complete.)

The poetry that grabbed me particularly in a sailing book was, of course, the work that didn't go directly over my head, in this case the nautical stuff. It is enough, however, to have a hint of the nautical and, if you are a brief poem fan, this will be right up your tributary.

That's right, with just a hint of nautical experience (long walks on a nearly deserted beach, anyone?) I'll wager you'll still be truly knocked out.

Try these two:


hills around
the lake
slower waves


Right about now, I'm thinking you've got the idea. If you ever puzzled over the wave/particle theory conundrum, this is another angle to come at it from.

Then there's this (italics and font size not in error):


sailors' home
everywhere you look
buddha's image


R. H. Blyth, via Bashō, posited the idea of haiku as a Way to transcendence, for both reader and poet alike, a la The Way of Tea, The Way of the Samurai, and The Way of Flowers (Ikebana). The moment I read this poem I had a feeling, a rare surging feeling of truth, a substantive confirmation of poetry, of haiku, as a path, a way.

If you've ever been in a sailor's home, or even work shack ... well, yes. No image or icon necessary.

The poem that prompted me to ask John if I might discuss a sailing book, and post a couple of poems here on the Hut, was the following modern haibun (included as a photo because I couldn't replicate the layout here - please click to enlarge):



Click image to enlarge



"... Hubble clouds, a million pavilions of a hundred jewels can you see ..." 

Oh, yes, yes ...

There is so much in this fine, precise collection by John that, really, I can't say enough so I will leave it here. 

The work, like many of John's books, is available for a modest price: in this case, $5. 

a sailing book is worth every cent, and much, much more. 




Art from the Internet Book Images
 
 
a wind-blown boat
a skylark
crossing paths

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Sunday, December 22, 2013

John Martone: Bheid - Small Press Sunday



At once a book of ideas and a book of practicalities, bheid, by John Martone, illustrates how one of the finest writers in the short form continues to push boundaries.

There is a narrative of sorts about building: building a boat, a house, a tree, a body, a dream. These are poems of correspondences, parallels between 'the real' and the contemplative. 

If you could build an abstraction with a two by four, John Martone would be your man. Not that this is what John Martone is about - he decidedly is not.

But he could be if he wanted to.

In some ways, I feel frankly out of my depth here and so simply will let the work wash over me (again and again and again) and take in what I might. bheid, the word, John notes as proto-Indo-European, meaning to split open (as a tree), and being a root word for the English boat.

There is much to do among titles and the bodies of the poems, some standing away, some at one with the work. The poems are challenging in their very openness, and herein is the boundary pushing. 

This is 50 plus pages of brief poetry well-worth connecting to. Here are 4 pieces I keep returning to:



one sheet 
paper

one sheet
plywood

taking 
yr time




even
a tree's
dead 

cells
conduct
water 





bubble-level 
    we're all adrift





not
from here

how 
nothing 
is



You can purchase Bheid for $7 at this site. If you'd like to sample it first, you can read it in its entirety here, because John is so incredibly generous.

Speaking of generosity and sharing, you can get another kind of glimpse at John and what moves him via this incredible youtube video, which he shared via email recently, about a woman living on her own in the Siberian wild. It is entitled Surviving in the Wilderness, and here it is in its entirety, 36 minutes in all. 



It says all there is to say about human beings living on the planet, giving a greater context for what it is we do everyday. Don't miss it.

And thanks, John.  For everything.

(For those wishing to know more about the lives of Agafia and her incredible family, there is a full length out-of-print book (and out of reach in the rare books market, price-wise) readily available through our national library interloan system.

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Photo by Lisa Olonynko



nothing at all
but a calm heart
and cool air
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Friday, April 26, 2013

John Martone: skeleton key - Small Press Friday


John Martone's book, a skeleton key, is a symbiotic combination of word and image. Both are by the poet himself, image every bit as stunning as word. There is much I could say about this work, but I must demure and let the work largely speak for itself.


a skeleton deer come to comfort you
  

This is no desku; the brilliant white bone, the whiteness of death confronting you like no other whiteness.

Confronts you?

Comforts you?


see thru
deer

eye-
sockets
&

hear
that freight 
train


New meaning is given here to sight, to sound - do you see it, do you hear it? 


far
from rest

deer's
pelvis

snagged
in root
  


One of the great virtues of the short poem, the haiku-like poem, is its engagement with the reader, demanding that the work be completed by another - this, for me, is a novel in 8 words.



all this 
time

you too
dis

arti
cu
lating




Ah, now here is another layer of story, a veil seen through to an other meaning - here is the key, right before you - do you know which door it fits precisely?



seagulls circle
hominid crouches
skeleton deer



Closer, closer, closer still ... 

Still ...


winter gusting
thru skeleton deer
nothing at all


Still.


skeleton deer
   crawdad hole

skeleton deer
   muskrat lodge

skeleton deer
   beaver dam

skeleton deer
   warbler's nest
   heron nest
   redwing nest
   squirrel nest

skeleton deer
skeleton deer
& all gone home 
  

You can hear it now, can't you? It's singing to you, it might be a little nursery rhyme, a bit of a jump rope jingle, something of a truism deeper and more profound than words themselves?


skeleton deer
now a trillion
invisible lives
  

A trillion lives ... seems almost just a handful, really. Find this intriguing? Want to read the whole thing? Mr. Martone has loaded skeleton key up on scribd, so just click on through. But bring your A game ...

... not the poetry one.  The Other one.

Oh, by the way, skeleton key was shortlisted and received an Honorable Mention for this year's Haiku Foundation Touchstone Distinguished Books Award.  So, really, give it a go. 
 
I think Bashō would be proud.




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the deer's flute playing
off-key...
song in the night
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue




   
best,
Don 

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Wednesday, February 15, 2012

Margaret Chula and John Martone: Wednesday Haiku Week 55





wind blows
the last brown leaves
clenched fingers
Margaret Chula
(from Grinding my ink, 1993)










geese above
his junkyard
it’s time
John Martone










with Buddha's peace
gazing at red leaves...
Mr. and Mrs. Deer
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue




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Lots of folks have been asking about the Waffle Shop reading/interview webcast. The good news is that it has been archived and can be seen here:


http://www.ustream.tv/recorded/20405757



best,
Don



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Monday, January 16, 2012

2011 Touchstone Distinguished Book Awards: The Shortlist

Photo by H. Zell


The shortlist for the 2011 Touchstone Distinguished Book Awards, presented by the Haiku Foundation, has been announced and here it is (with the original post):

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Beyond the Reach of My Chopsticks: New and Selected Haiku; written by Fay Aoyagi, published by Blue Willow Press

Haiku Roadsign: Axle Contemporary; edited and designed by Matthew Chase-Daniel and Jerry Wellman, published by Axle Contemporary

Penguins/ Pingviner; written by Johannes Bjerg, published by Cyberwit

A Narrow Road/ Uska Staza; written by Ljubomir Dragovic, published by Liber Press

The River Knows the Way; edited by Cynthia Cechota, et al, published by Haiku Dubuque

Dreams Wander On: Contemporary Poems of Death Awareness; edited by Robert Epstein, published by Modern English Tanka Press

A New Resonance 7; edited by Dee Evetts and Jim Kacian, published by Red Moon Press

My Favorite Thing, written by Michael Ketchek, Bob Lucky and Lucas Stensland , edited by Stanford M. Forrester, published by Bottle Rockets Press

Few Days North Days Few; written by Paul M., published by Red Moon Press

St. John’s Wort; written by John Martone, published by Samuddo / Ocean

The Neighbours Are Talking: Haibun; written by Mike Montreuil, published by Bondi Studios/Baby Buddha Press

An Unmown Sky/ Nepokoseno Nebo; edited by Boris Nazansky, et al., published by Haiku Association Three Rivers

Things Being What They Are, written by John S. O’Connor, published by Deep North Press

The Future of Haiku: An Interview with Kaneko Tohta; trans. from the Japanese by the Kon Nichi Translation Group, published by Red Moon Press

Past All Traps; written by Don Wentworth, published by Six Gallery Press

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I couldn't find relevant links for three of the books.  If anyone knows of any, please send them along this way and I'll update the list.

Best of luck to all ...





stone still
he lets the snow fall
colt in the pasture
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue






 Photo by Thduke







best,
Don



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Monday, October 31, 2011

John Martone: Monday Twitter Poem, 10/31/11

 Photo by Kevin Higgins




this
stream
bed's

my
spine
too
John Martone 
Lilliput Review, #167








downstream, the gate
to knowledge...
evening's red leaves
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue





Photo by Jim Sandstein








best,
Don



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Friday, September 30, 2011

Beano Gee and the Mystery Poetry Art

Artwork by Beano Gee

Well, here's a Friday conundrum for ya. An artist buddy of mine told me he found a piece he had done awhile back that was based on a poem, only it had been so long he completely forgot what poem it was. So, he came to me, me being the at work poetry guy. I puzzled and searched and guessed and struggled and came up with zilch.

A few days later, his addled brain pan spit back up the obscure bit of info, which wasn't all that obscure once he remembered it. That got me to thinking - I wonder if anybody else would know?

So, poetry mavens, here's the challenge: what poem is this piece of art based on?

To spice the pot (and get your own addled brain pan sizzling), I'll throw in a 15 issue subscription (or an extension to your current subscription) to Lilliput Review for anyone who can guess the poem or the first line (a bit tricky, that part, and something of a hint) AND the poet, or a 6 issue subscription for anyone who simply guesses the poet.

Reply either in the comments section below or directly to me via email (lilliput review AT gmail DOT org).

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Recently, Curtis Dunlap (30 haiku by Curtis - just hit "next") over at Blogging Along Tobacco road did a nice introduction to haiku and senryu that is most definitely worth checking out. Though I don't agree with everything he says - put two haiku poets in a waiting room and they will find something to disagree about except their sly attentiveness to that ceiling fly - give it a look see. It is very worthwhile.

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Anyone who follows this blog with regularity knows how very enthralled I am with the work of John Martone, one of the finest poets writing the short poem today. Here is a recent book by John, microscope field, in all its 96 page glory. It is full of wonder. A tip o' the hat to Scott Watson for pointing me toward it.



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Finally, today's archival selection comes from Lilliput Review #178 and it is a beauty. Enjoy.





Hearing a flute song
The monk's hand pauses
Copying the sutra.
Furrowed brows, you are
Too young for such a look
Yosano Akiko
translated by Dennis Maloney









wafting through trees
a beggar's flute
a nightingale

Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue





best,
Don



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Friday, June 10, 2011

Experience Chan: Experience Zen - Master Hsu Yun (Xu Yun)


One of my favorite spots on the net to drop by is Don Stabler's "Bamboo and Plum Blossom" blog.  Don recently posted three excellent stanzas of a poem by Master Hsu Yun one might call "Experience Chan."   Chan being referred to is the Chinese word for the discipline that is known in Japanese, and now the West, as Zen.

The three posted stanzas so intrigued me, that I went off in search info on Hsu Yun (Xu Yun), only to discover there were another 9 more stanzas


1. Experience Chan! It’s not mysterious.
As I see it, it boils down to cause and effect.
Outside the mind there is no Dharma
So how can anybody speak of a heaven beyond?

2. Experience Chan! It’s not a field of learning.
Learning adds things that can be researched and discussed.
The feel of impressions can’t be communicated.
Enlightenment is the only medium of transmission.

3. Experience Chan! It’s not a lot of questions.
Too many questions is the Chan disease.
The best way is just to observe the noise of the world.
The answer to your questions?  Ask your own heart.

4. Experience Chan! It’s not the teachings of disciples.
Such speakers are guests from outside the gate.
The Chan which you are hankering to speak about
Only talks about turtles turning into fish.

5. Experience Chan! It can’t be described.
When you describe it you miss the point.
When you discover that your proofs are without substance
You’ll realize that words are nothing but dust.

6. Experience Chan! It’s experiencing your own nature!
Going with the flow everywhere and always.
When you don’t fake it and waste time trying to rub and polish it,
Your Original Self will always shine through brighter than bright.

7. Experience Chan! It’s like harvesting treasures.
But donate them to others.You won’t need them.
Suddenly everything will appear before you,
Altogether complete and altogether done.

8. Experience Chan! Become a follower who when accepted
Learns how to give up his life and his death.
Grasping this carefully he comes to see clearly.
And then he laughs till he topples the Cold Mountain ascetics.

9. Experience Chan! It’ll require great skepticism;
But great skepticism blocks those detours on the road.
Jump off the lofty peaks of mystery.
Turn your heaven and earth inside out.

10. Experience Chan! Ignore that superstitious nonsense
That makes some claim that they’ve attained Chan.
Foolish beliefs are those of the not-yet-awakened.
And they’re the ones who most need the experience of Chan!

11. Experience Chan! There’s neither distance nor intimacy.
Observation is like a family treasure.
Whether with eyes, ears, body, nose, or tongue -
It’s hard to say which is the most amazing to use.

12. Experience Chan! There’s no class distinction.
The one who bows and the one who is bowed to are a Buddha unit.
The yoke and its lash are tied to each other.
Isn’t this our first principle… the one we should most observe?
Master Hsu Yun

If you head on over to "Bamboo and Plum Blossom" and discover you like Don's approach, don't hesitate to check out he's other fine blog "peace pulse path and prevail," an eclectic collection of brief incisive quotations.


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This week's feature poem comes from Lilliput Review, #159.  As always, John Martone nails it perfectly.  Enjoy.


  gold now
  jack
  in his

  pulpit's
  done
  preaching
John Martone







the preacher's
hand gestures too...
summer trees
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue








best,
Don


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Friday, May 20, 2011

Bob Arnold's Yokel: The Continuum Is Clear




John Martone is one of my favorite contemporary poets of the short form, so when he offered a review of Bob Arnold's new book, Yokel - A Long Green Mountain Poem, I was happy to accept.   It is with great pleasure that I turn the critical reins over to John, particularly since I've published and always enjoy reading Arnold's work.  John's opinions, of course, are his own. 

And let me hasten to add they are opinions I respect mightily.


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Bob Arnold: Yokel – A Long Green Mountain Poem. Guilford, VT: Longhouse, 2011. xvi + 139 pages. $18.

Yokel: n. A country bumpkin; a naïve or gullible rustic:  “These conspirators were not all the unlettered yokels which some historians would have them to be” (E.P. Thompson). Perhaps from English dialectical yokel, green woodpecker (probably imitative of its note). 
--American Heritage Dictionary

Arnold would appreciate the irony of our ‘American’ dictionary citing The Rise of the English Working Class to describe what his backwoods folks are not. His Long Green Mountain Poem is a study in human ecology, and both the people and crises he shows us have now-obscure roots, of course, in the world of Thompson’s masterwork. Our poet has tilted word’s meaning though, for our Yokel is poet-conspirator and participant-observer, a green woodpecker hammering away at the insects in a tall tree. Someone we hear.

Native, the otherwise nameless protagonists who populate Arnold’s world, is the voiceless 21st century back country dweller, male or female, who inhabits (often but not exclusively) trailer, drives either a derelict junker, spiffy new Dodge trucks, or ancient tractor towing hay wagons now laden with defunct computers and other appliances to  pastureland dump. Native is poor; and the intrusion of manufactured trash in all its forms renders the poverty of his rural world even starker. In Back Road Archaeology, the male of the species cooks the family breakfast of pancakes then—

Tosse[s] the paper plate onto a year’s
Worth of paper plates on the back porch,
Each licked clean by his dogs.

In Native Never Made It, we read how he “got in/ With a wrong bunch”:

Much younger—
Drugs and drinking—
And they thought
Nothing about tanking
Up an old fart logger
With wicked cocaine
And dumping his
Gasping body of
At the emergency
Room entrance
From a car that
Never stopped—
Just like the movies

Both character and place have been poisoned by a virulent culture. Exotic/non-native industrial species are a threatening presence, turning up throughout the collection. A one-time Farmer now installs wood-pellet stoves that he doesn’t quite understand.  He drives “A beautiful pickup truck with the fanciest side mirrors/ on both doors. It seemed like 3D. Elsewhere, powerful men consider poisoning an old mill with toxic waste in order to preserve it from developers.

Poisoned and expropriated, Arnold’s Vermont is a third-world country. His Pastures of Plenty are reduced to a junkyard, or worse:

If it’s not a junkyard—then it will be real estate.
If it’s real estate—it will be a few new
Houses built lopsided on turgid ground
                                                   …ruined
By oil spills, junk metal and pallets of old
Batteries…

Arnold watches. As we know from such earlier books as On Stone, in which he records the subtleties of building a stone playhouse for his son Carson, he is nothing if not careful. (If you ever have the privilege of visiting his home, you will find the 10,000 books of his store and every tool in his workshop each in its place, ready to hand in the flash of an eye.) His craft, his design, is unobtrusive –no showy  bricoleur, but every element counts. Arnold’s informal pentameter, for example, argues with Frost, much as that poet argued with Emerson before him. We don’t have Frost’s family tragedies any longer, because the family has been eviscerated. What we see instead is the erasure of a world, in the trailers that replace wooden houses (only to be abandoned in turn as in Gone), in chance self-sufficiency so often overwhelmed by the presumptions of new-comer wealth. It would probably be stretching things to say that the class divide is as stark as one would see in the Dominican Republic, say, or to call this cultural genocide, but the continuum is pretty clear.

The poet lives in his world, though, and that life always feels stronger than the dangers that imperil it. We see this in two poems for his son Carson, reflecting that meticulous care mentioned above—

The Worst Thing About a Young Son

Your orderly
Toolbox will never
Be the same


One of the Best Things about a Young Son

That he cares
That you have a toolbox
In the first place

There are poems of profound affection for Susan (a longer collection – 30-plus years! is forthcoming) a magnificent poem for Richard Levasseur, and elegies for others who live again.  And there is the affirmation with which this Green Mountain poem ends, in which Arnold, like Thoreau of The Maine Woods, improves our ignorance:

Go-Along

stars
bright

enough
light

snowshoe
trail the

woods all
night



—john martone







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Issue #155 of Lilliput Review was jam packed with a fine collection of short work.  You can find 5 fine examples in this past post.   And here's one more, from March 2007, to give you pause:




Early sun.
The snow-covered
manure pile
bright as Mount Fuji.

Don't talk to me
about enlightenment.
    Lynne Bama








nightingale --
even his shit
gets wrapped in paper.

Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue





best,
Don



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Friday, December 31, 2010

John Martone: scrittura povera


John Martone is one of the finest purveyors of the short form in English today.  Certainly, he is one of my favorites.  When one of his gorgeous minimalist productions arrives in my mailbox, I am thrilled in a way recent books rarely thrill me today.

scrittura povera ("poor writing") is the latest volume to come from John and it opens with this intriguing epigraph:

hempen clothes and paper bedding ... ippen

The quotation is interesting, giving a little foot in the door of the master's hut.  Which master, you ask?

Ah, that is the question.
 
For those who might be interested, here is a very informative article on Hijiri Ippen, the master quoted in the epigraph, from Hermitary, a resource on hermits and solitude.  For those who want the poems on their own terms (I frequently fall in this school myself, hence this option), I would suggest simply skipping the article and head right to the poems below.



Well, enough of context, on to text!  Or, perhaps, as we look at the opening poem, we see the poet has given us both at once:


see that
cumulo-
nimbus—

that's yr
body


Not quite a riddle, eh; for those who take a wholistic approach to existence, this makes sense.  For those who are blues aficionados, the lyric "the stream flows to the river, the river flows to the sea"  may come to mind.  The image is not a trope, it is quite literal.

down to 3
cardboard boxes
and his teeth


An even cursory glance at the Hermitary article gives up the concept eremiticism, the life of the hermit.  Ippen was a hermit and a monk, who ultimately traveled widely spreading his belief in  Pure Land Buddhism.   The speaker here, too, exhibits hermit-like qualities - all life is honed down to 3 cardboard boxes and teeth, maybe just 3 of those, too.

how much time
do you need
morning glory



In terms of modern haiku, it just doesn't get much better than this.  There is certainly a touch of Issa here, a perfect balancing between the comic and the serious.  It is, as is life, both at the same time.  The same principle underlies the following:


bug-bitten
everywhere after
a good sleep


Here the speaker begins with misery and ends with happiness - how many of us would think of the good sleep we had after an onslaught of bed bugs?  We might even think the two elements of the haiku are backwards, when it is us, our lives, that are backwards, or at least our perception of them.

4
empty
chairs

a
circle

outside
their
trailer


Their is something at once contemporary and timeless about this observed scene.  Virtually all of us have seen a variation of the same, yet how often does it call to mind something nearly mythic, evoked by the simple circle.


prairie grasses
a human being
also standing upright


Classic haiku often compares/contrasts seemingly disparate elements; the resolution of these disparities (a mountain in a dragonfly's eye, a snail climbing, climbing, climbing Mount Fuji) evokes the oneness of all things.  Here the oneness of all life, the life essence, is perfectly conjured.


chimney swifts stitch a day's end


There is a beautiful, imagistic, Buson-like quality to this - it is almost as if the insect-hunting swifts are actually gathering pieces of darkness together into night (all in 6 brief words).

watching that spider
you wash yr hands


One of Issa's most popular haiku - the fly wringing it's hands, wringing it's feet - is thought of here; though not as pyrotechnic, this haiku is even better, because it drops out the anthropomorphic quality and connects all beings in a simple gesture.

not one word
a night song


This perfectly evokes the hermit life - there is such a wonderful quality to the idea of song without words, be it bird, animal, or person.

in an apartment under the moon


Sensing the presence of the moon in an enclosed, sealed building also reminds us of the hermit experience and what it must be like for someone who lives alone in a remote area to experience living with others.  A less talented poet would be tempted to "finish this poem."

fossil hunting
my life
of the spirit


As lovers of haiku know and as mentioned above, many a great poem in this form derives from disparate elements.   What does fossil hunting have to do with the life of the spirit?  Well, here is a perfect example of a poem in which the denouement takes place in the reader's head or, if you will, the reader is left to complete the poem.

So I'll leave that one to you, with only the thought that I enjoyed it very much.

that
romance
of

a
single
room

This last poem throws us back on a single word, a word we think we know, a word that, if we don't encounter it daily, we certainly encounter with great frequency.  What, oh what, does romance mean?

It means so many things and is such a lovely way to end a book, and a blog post, that I'll end as John Martone ends - right here.


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By way of explanation: with a fair amount of regularity, I post on Fridays and Sundays.  Friday concentrates on poetry related issues, Sunday, leans more toward music of a literary bend, with a healthy dose of poetry.  In both postings I feature a poem (or poems) from back issues in the Lilliput archive.  Somehow, I got two separate strands going with the postings for the different days.  Currently, the Friday post, as with this one, is featuring issues counting down from the current issues; the Sunday post contains poems from issues counting up from #1.  Two different strands, which occasionally pass through the night, which is exactly what happened recently.

Just a few weeks ago, I featured two poems by Albert Huffstickler from issue #117.  Here's a third from the same issue.  Wave as we pass by.  A braid of two contiguous time travel strands, if you will.
Note to self: ease up on the Doctor Who reruns.

Enjoy.

I imagine my mother
seated at the yellow table
in her kitchen
sunlight touching
her still face:
so few people
we ever really know.
Albert Huffstickler









burning mosquitoes--
in the paper lamp
my dear one's face
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue




Happy New Year, everyone.



best,
Don

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