Photo by Kate Ter Haar
wind blown drizzle-
each bead on the clothes line
a full moon
Yesha Shah
Photo by Lorenzo Scheda
windy day…
the pages turn
to the last line
Sneha Mojumdar
Artwork by Utagawa Hiroshige (via Brooklyn Museum)
shining up
the evening moon...
autumn wind
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I can hear the musical triad - nice
Haiku written by Yesha and Sneha are very beautiful.Yesha explores in telescopic style by comparing water drops on the clothes line with the distant moon.
Sneha could unfold the happening in a windy day by expressing a dynamic occurrence reaching to the last line.An innovative way of arranging the words!The art work by Lorenzo and Utagawa are worth praising.
Ah, the power of the wind!
Cheers, Anonymous.
PK, Well-observed, all around.
Bart, The wind!!
Don
Thanks a ton, Don for picking up one of my students' haiku. Sneha (15 years) studying in Sanskriti School Delhi, wrote this haiku in the haiku workshop I had conducted in December 2014.
The minute Sneha read it out I said it was beautiful. Don, Sneha is so happy her haiku is chosen and published in such a grand way!
Yesha, you've got a good one here too!
_kala
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A wonderful blog to explore beautoful moments through well written haiku.
Well written Sneha and Yesha.
Kala:
My very best to Sneha ... a deep bow from me to honor a spirit that cuts so quickly to the essence.
And thank you for your wonderful work with your students, Kala. With this type of devotion, the future is assured.
best,
Don
Anonymous ... thanks. Don
I want to be one of your student, too, Kala!
Yes, it's a wonderful blog to explore beautiful moments through well written haiku.
Hugs to Sneha and Yesha.
Thanks, Don.
a deep bow,
KeN
Cheers, Ken.
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