Note: Following last week's post, here is Part II on
The Little Treasury of Haiku. As I write this note, it is looking like there will be a part 3 ... perhaps after a brief pause, eh? Meanwhile, let's plunge right in, shall we?
Master Buson seems to be waiting ... patiently.
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Now the swinging bridge
Is quieted with creepers . . .
Like our tendrilled life
Bashō
Another beautiful little Bashō poem; to more contemporary sensibilities, certainly the "Like" is unnecessary. We are all in the business of throwing everything overboard that is unnecessary, correct? The traditional contrasting of diverse elements here reveals metaphor, which usually goes unstated or even is totally avoided in haiku.
The image is strong, though, particularly for modern man. When was the last time anyone thought about a rope bridge being muted by vegetation? And so our lives, you say?
And so our lives, indeed.
Watching, I wonder
What poet could put down his quill . . .
A pluperfect moon!
Onitsura
Now here is a conundrum wrapped up in a riddle. There will be no easy retrieving when pulling the string of the balloon of that pluperfect moon. What is the translator after here, is it analogous to something Onitsura wrote - is he speaking of the past and present moments simultaneously or some syntactical implication that is simply beyond my comprehension here?
This is the deep end of the haiku pool and now I'm thinking
I shouldn't have been so flip about Master Suzuki in part I of this post.
White chrysanthemum . . .
Before the perfect flower
Scissors hesitate
Buson
This is another wonderful poem in a fine translation. However, when compared to R. H. Blyth, as noted
in a previous post, we see the difference between fine and great:
The scissors hesitate
Before the white chysanthemums,
A moment.
Buson
Using just one more word than Beilenson, Blyth captures the same action
and the action which immediately follows (or happens). In the former, the flower is not cut; in the later it is.
Did Beilenson fumble or Blyth interpolate? I have no idea, once again I am shamed before Dr. Suzuki.
But I do love that I have both of these to compare, propelling me ever closer to Master Buson.
Fireworks ended
And spectators gone away . . .
Ah, how vast and dark!
Shiki
Now here is a Shiki poem I can cozy up to. There is more than the art and the emptiness - though emptiness there is. The emptiness in this poem reverberates in a way I often find lacking in Shiki.
My volume had a glorious typo in this one: "firewords" for "fireworks."
Deepen, drop, and die
Many-hued chrysanthemum . . .
One black earth for all
Ryushi
The use by Beilenson of heavy alliteration - du, du, du - is most effective in this dark poem by Ryushi. Even if you read the d sounds lightly, it could be each petal detaching and falling off, one by one. Take your pick, the endgame is the same.
Plume of pampas grass
Trembling in every wind . . .
Hush, my lonely heart
Issa
Trembling is the word which links the two elements of this ku. Lonely is the word that breaks ours.
Winter rain deepens
Lichened letters on the grave . . .
And my old sadness.
Roka
Nature not only mirrors the poet's old grief, it deepens it literally, in the way water highlights etched letters on stone. This simple, natural act calls all back to mind, because old really is the most important word here. The grief, it is thought, had begun to fade like the letters but upon seeing the faded letters again, the pain too comes to the fore, and is as wrenching as ever. A perfect, if grief-laden, haiku moment.
From my tiny roof
Smooth . . . soft . . . still-white snow
Melts in melody
Issa
I like what this poem seems to be about, though I'm not so sure of the translation. The last line feels a bit forced, and not as clear as it could be. Still, a lovely winter subject, embodying a lovely, universal feeling.
Under my tree-roof
Slanting lines of April rain
Separate to drops
Bashō
Another type of roof, another fine weather poem; this time the poet, with an artist's eye, closely observes water's mercurial qualities. The picture is perfect; there is a sense that everything is exactly so.
Riverbank plum tree . . .
Do your reflected blossoms
Really float away?
Buson
Buson the painter is sketching something with words that even he, perhaps, could not capture with a painter's brush. What is real, the poet seems to be asking himself, as he questions the plum tree, what is not?
The seashore temple . . .
Incoming rollers flow in time
To the holy flute
Buson
Another beauty by Buson, this time auditory instead of visual (though it is that, too, just not primarily). Because the temple is so near the sea, we glean that the sea is a source of all things i.e. music. The beat and rhythm of the rollers is the primal sound, the sound which cannot be said, the aum/om sound of all things, the sound all music is based on. The flute is holy, the temple is holy, the sea is holy.
Holy, holy, holy, holy . . .
Finally, for this post
Moonlight stillness
Lights the petals falling . . . falling . . .
On the silenced lute
Shiki
Stillness and silence and falling, falling. There is an ominous quality to Shiki's poem. It could simply be that all are asleep, hence the stillness and the silence, and yet the falling makes one wonder at that very silence and stillness.
Let's leave the mystery be, until part III, either next week or soon thereafter.
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This week's issue from the archives is
Lilliput Review, #
135, from January 2004.
in the snow
another
perfect yellow ensō
Ed Baker
pissing a perfect
circle...
a cold night
best,
Don
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