Friday, December 11, 2015

James W. Hackett (I.M.): 4 Haiku

Recently, I've been re-reading the introduction to Cor van den Heuvel's The Haiku Anthology (3rd ed.) and, when it comes to English language haiku poets, it essentially begins with James W. Hackett and Nick Virgilio. Of course, there were others earlier, but these are two major poets at the beginning of what van den Heuvel speculates may someday be called 'the golden age' of English language haiku.  

This sent me back to a collection of his work, The Way of Haiku: an Anthology of Haiku Poems, Japan Publications, 1969. I read it a few years back and, as is customary when I read poetry books, I have a slip of paper inside that serves the dual function of bookmark and place where I note down the page of poems that are, for me, highlights.

The book is over 250 pages long, 3 haiku to a page, and my note sheet has lots and lots of poems marked. Often I will put a special mark - an asterick or check - next to a page for poems that moved we especially. So, I looked at these first and, of all things, 
a particular image/theme appeared and so here are 3 of the especially highlighted poems:

 Photo by Nebojsa Mladjenovic

Now that I have freed
  the butterfly from the web
    I feel uneasy.

The design that spins 
  the spider, allows him no rest
    until its done.

A long line of web
  loose at both ends, riding free
    on the summer breeze

Photo by Chris Sorge

Early on, Hackett received the imprimatur of haiku guru R. H. Blyth, who, in Hackett, saw the very real possibility for haiku in English. You will note that all the haiku are in the strict 5/7/5 form, with beginning caps and punctuation, as was the prevailing approach of the day.

And none seem worse for that. I could talk a bit about what attracted Hackett to this imagery (and me, as reader, to those images/themes in his work), but perhaps it best to leave the air of mystery.

After all, it is life, isn't it?

One other observation is that the poems are all focused exclusively on nature. "Now that I have freed" is a rare instance of the intrusion of the poet (or any other human) in Hackett's work. The last poem below does not have that intrusion, but in it, I feel, you can sense very real human emotion and, so, not surprisingly, for those of you who know we and my own approach, it is one of my favorites:

Left by the tide
   within a shallowing pool:
        a frantic minnow

Photo by Brad Smith

some stay behind
in the green leaves...
low tide crows
trans. by David G. Lanoue


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Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Daryl Nielsen & Elizabeth Crocket: Wednesday Haiku, #224

 Illustration by Helen Stratton

evening image                    
on the lake’s surface
boy that still is

        Daryl Nielsen

Photo by G. dallorto


their headstone
whispering out loud

the news they'd want to hear
        Elizabeth Crocket

the lake is slowly
lost in mist...
evening falls

trans. by David G. Lanoue


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