Showing posts with label David G. Lanoue. Show all posts
Showing posts with label David G. Lanoue. Show all posts

Sunday, August 7, 2016

The crane screeches, the cicada's cry: Deep Mystery in the Haiku of Bashō

Photo by Castlelass


In loving memory of the Jane Reichhold, who, among her many accomplishments, is her English language translation of 

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     The crane screeches:
At its voice
     The bashō will surely tear

                         Bashō
                         Translated by R. H. Blyth



In my morning reading (Haiku, v. 4, R. H. Blyth), I ran across the above Bashō poem which I didn't remember but which struck me immediately. It put me in mind of the more famous Bashō poem:


Quietness--
Sinking into the rocks,
A cicada's cry

        Bashō
        Translated by Makota Ueda


Some translations go so far as to say piercing the rock(s), which heightens the mystery inherent in the poem. What struck me here is the relationship between these two pieces, the first a touch more literal, the second, more famous poem, perhaps closer to the mystery.


And what of the mystery? The less said, the more realized? Perhaps the poems are each transcendent moments or, in this case, two moments sharing a certain otherness?


Thinking on these things, I took a break for breakfast, and began reading a review of a book on, believe or not, camping. In the book, as noted by the reviewer, the author made a rather a limp joke referencing one of Leonard Cohen's most famous verses:


Ring the bells that still can ring 
Forget your perfect offering 
There is a crack in everything 
That's how the light gets in. 


Bad joke or not, as so often happens in my morning reading, the bell rang ... again and again and again.


Leonard Cohen's "Anthem."






my cracked teacup
like Buddha on display...
plum blossoms

             Issa
             trans. by David G. Lanoue



best, 
Don

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Wednesday, May 18, 2016

Patrick Sweeney & Chen-ou Liu: Wednesday Haiku, #228




Chess between adepts
persimmons on
a leafless tree

Patrick Sweeney


Photo by Brendan Adkins



the whiteness
of a cold moon ...
you, slanted eyes

Chen-ou Liu



Photo by Joe Stump



in cherry blossom shade
there are even those
who hate this world

Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don
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Wednesday, January 20, 2016

Sondra J. Bynes & Kalyana Hapsari: Wednesday Haiku, #225

Photo by Philip Chapman-Bell



he didn't leave a message--watching cottonwood fluff fall up
                                   Sondra J. Byrnes


Photo by Laura Lewis



candle light dinner 
lipstick on her wine glass 
glistens 
      Kalyana Hapsari


Photo by Kristy Hom


cotton fluff scatters--
little thicket, little shrine
little ditch
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Friday, December 11, 2015

James W. Hackett (I.M.): 4 Haiku


Recently, I've been re-reading the introduction to Cor van den Heuvel's The Haiku Anthology (3rd ed.) and, when it comes to English language haiku poets, it essentially begins with James W. Hackett and Nick Virgilio. Of course, there were others earlier, but these are two major poets at the beginning of what van den Heuvel speculates may someday be called 'the golden age' of English language haiku.  

This sent me back to a collection of his work, The Way of Haiku: an Anthology of Haiku Poems, Japan Publications, 1969. I read it a few years back and, as is customary when I read poetry books, I have a slip of paper inside that serves the dual function of bookmark and place where I note down the page of poems that are, for me, highlights.

The book is over 250 pages long, 3 haiku to a page, and my note sheet has lots and lots of poems marked. Often I will put a special mark - an asterick or check - next to a page for poems that moved we especially. So, I looked at these first and, of all things, 
a particular image/theme appeared and so here are 3 of the especially highlighted poems:

 Photo by Nebojsa Mladjenovic



Now that I have freed
  the butterfly from the web
    I feel uneasy.


The design that spins 
  the spider, allows him no rest
    until its done.




A long line of web
  loose at both ends, riding free
    on the summer breeze



Photo by Chris Sorge


Early on, Hackett received the imprimatur of haiku guru R. H. Blyth, who, in Hackett, saw the very real possibility for haiku in English. You will note that all the haiku are in the strict 5/7/5 form, with beginning caps and punctuation, as was the prevailing approach of the day.

And none seem worse for that. I could talk a bit about what attracted Hackett to this imagery (and me, as reader, to those images/themes in his work), but perhaps it best to leave the air of mystery.

After all, it is life, isn't it?

One other observation is that the poems are all focused exclusively on nature. "Now that I have freed" is a rare instance of the intrusion of the poet (or any other human) in Hackett's work. The last poem below does not have that intrusion, but in it, I feel, you can sense very real human emotion and, so, not surprisingly, for those of you who know we and my own approach, it is one of my favorites:


Left by the tide
   within a shallowing pool:
        a frantic minnow


Photo by Brad Smith


some stay behind
in the green leaves...
low tide crows
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Susan Diridoni & Vibeke Laier: Wednesday Haiku, #223

 Photo by Aedallou

 

sans pearls summer peaches
          Susan Diridoni


 

Photo by Mike McCaffrey



summer moon
how tenderly waves
touch paper boats

      Vibeke Laier







the katydid
in the paper bag...
still singing

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Alexis Rotella & Kanchan Chatterjee: Wednesday Haiku, #220

Photo by Troy Mason


The things
he doesn't say
slow-growing ivy

Alexis Rotella


Photo by Ivo Ivov


summer noon. . .
even the woodpecker's pecking
sounds heavy

Kanchan Chatterjee


Photo by Inderjit Nijjer



geese flying south--
the ducks at the gate
cheer them on

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Rehn Kovacic & Matthew Moffett: Wednesday Haiku, #219

Image from Talshiarr



Picking up each seed
   the bird bows--
        backyard Buddha

Rehn Kovacic



Photo by Ross




beside themselves
beside the cracked-up pavement
daffodils

Matthew Moffett


Artwork by Hishida Shunso




still plum blossoms
my head, by itself
bows
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, August 5, 2015

Ida Frelinger & Susan Diridoni: Wednesday Haiku, #218


Image by Tom Simpson via foter




one day at a time
a duckling skids
into the no-wake zone

     Ida Frelinger




Photo by azut via foter



sprouting oaks fugue a welcome

               Susan Diridoni 





Photo by Paul Hudson via foter




my money sprouted wings
and flew away...
the year ends

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, June 3, 2015

Mary Frederick Ahearn & Pravat Kumar Padhy: Wednesday Haiku, #213

Photo by Clyde Bentley



how tenderly
the hawk feeds her young -
who are we to say

Mary Frederick Ahearn


 

Photo by Chris Gunns



autumn melancholy--
the shadow connects
the trees

Pravat Kumar Padhy



Photo by Kusakabe Kimbei

 
in the wake
of the Buddhist procession...
honking geese
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Wednesday, May 20, 2015

Goran Gatalica & Olivier Schopfer: Wednesday Haiku, #212

Photo of a Jackdaw (member of the Crow family)  by Jyrki Salmi


the Blue crow
brings morning silence
with its wings
Goran Gatalica



Photo by Ricardo Cuppini
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first drops of rain...
halfway up the wild rose stem
a ladybird stops
Olivier Schopfer


Photo by Adrian Kingsley-Hughes



making mountains rise
in the clouds...
cawing crow
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Sunday, May 17, 2015

Chiyo-ni: the plum flower ...

Photo by Appaloosa 


so so sad 
to miss the plum flower
before it fell
Chiyo-ni
trans. by Patricia Donegan & Yoshi Ishibashi


Though I was tempted at first to say, "Here is the modern dilemma," really, here is the human dilemma, shared by no other species. In Patricia Donegan's commentary on this poem, she mentions that this is more than likely a poem of mourning for fellow haiku poet, Shiko, whose pen name means 'plum flower.' Of course, the poem stands also on its own with this second level of meaning.

One of the books in my morning "pile" of poetry is Chiyo-ni: Woman Haiku Master, translated with commentary by Patricia Donegan, with the assistance of Yoshi Ishibashi. It is truly a masterwork. Unfortunately, it is out of print from Tuttle and copies are going for $100 and up. One can only hope that it will again see the light of day as it is a must for any serious haiku collection. 

Donegan's work here, particularly as commentator, as in Haiku Mind, is transcendent. In my limited experience, she is only surpassed by Blyth. 



plum blossoms gone
suddenly Kyoto
looks old

Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue

Photo of Seiryuga haiden

best,
Don

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Wednesday, April 29, 2015

Kala Ramesh & Elmedin Kadric: Wednesday Haiku, #209

Photo by John Morgan



fallen blossom
  the silent  farewell 
deepens the sunset
Kala Ramesh





shadowboxing...
the panhandler
cheers me on
Elmedin Kadric 


Photo by Margherita Ballarin  via foter



lotus blossoms--
the beggar's smoke
wafts over
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Sunday, April 5, 2015

Gerald Vizenor: favor of crows: New and Collected Haiku



favor of crows by Gerald Vizenor has plenty to celebrate and plenty to ponder. The poems here are largely quiet, occasionally listless, many are image-based and some are simply revelatory, in the sense that anything revelatory can be simple.

But wait: perhaps that listlessness is something else. 


       bright hollyhocks
teeter in the rush of trains
        flurry of faces


Like many fine haiku, these poems on the surface do not give up their essence easily. So, we see that if it is mind that struggles, lay aside mind and, as again with many fine haiku, something else appears: meaning opening up with the first rays of the sun.


            gusts of rain
trees turn away from the sea
            beach stories


Gerald Vizenor is a poet, critic, cultural theorist and academician, a leading Native American writer of the last half century and a member of the Chippewa Nation. He is a haiku scholar as well as haiku poet - his introduction, entitled "Haiku Scenes," displays his command of haiku history and haiku essence, and situates him in the Zen Buddhist / R. H. Blyth school of haiku theory and practice.


            red poppies 
trace the motion of the sun
        elders in the park


His linking of Native American culture and concepts to Japanese culture is at once informative and historical (Vizenor, as was true with many Americans, encountered the culture first hand during a tour of duty in WW II), and the relationship to nature and animism in both cultures makes for interesting, thought-provoking theory.


        china sunrise
tourists circle the statues
        cicada fugues


Ultimately, there is a balance of theory and feeling, the academic and the lyrical, and the truth is revealed in the poems themselves. His haiku are firmly nature based and season themed, with two contrasting elements stylistically prompting revelations both large and small, succinct and resonant, as in this poem.


    marsh marigolds
trembling in the rain
     faces on a bus


This haiku reminded me simultaneously of the classic haiku of the horse and the trembling flowers (a little help, anyone; I can't quite recall the poet or the poem exactly) and Pound's petals/faces/Metro poem.

The book is arranged seasonally, as are many traditional haiku collections. The autumn section is particularly strong, with the following poem recalling Bashō's famous autumn crow haiku (scroll down for multiple translations via this link):


          spider web
billows on a bare branch
            empty


Vizenor is at once subtle and almost understated, presenting us with images and contrast, and letting the reader take it from there. Like the finest haiku throughout time and across cultures.


         mountain snow
warblers search for apricots
           no regrets


We know the warblers have no regrets; how about you? 

Or perhaps the warblers do. What to make of these clever little sparrows?


       noisy sparrows
flutter over the birdbath
     clearing the snow


Sentience, learned behavior, coincidence?  Some things to ask ourselves as well as the sparrows.

Gerald Vizenor asks, and his answers are of the very best type; they are suggestive, they are lyrical, they are alive.

This is a book I anticipate revisiting again and again, as the seasons return again and again.  And, as with the seasons, one can anticipate a return of joy, each time different, each time the very same. Give it a try, from the library or the nearest bookstore, electronic or otherwise

It will reward you deeply. 


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Eigenfaces by Ylebru



the first cherry blossoms
soon scatter and stick...
people's faces
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue



best,
Don

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Sunday, March 29, 2015

Cid Corman: Yet


I have fond memories of my correspondence with Cid Corman over the years: a generous man, a resonant poet, and an insightful master of life's great mystery.

If you don't know what that great mystery is, pick up a collection of Cid's work and you'll soon find out. You'll find no obfuscating there.

My friends at the local used and rare bookshop, Caliban Books, know something of my tastes and so, one day a year or two back when I stepped in, they handed me the little volume, pictured above, that they had put aside for me when it came in.

And I've been meaning to write about it ever since. 

A tiny little volume that fits nicely in the palm of your hand, yet was published in an edition of 500 copies by Elizabeth Press in New Rochelle, NY, in March 1974, finely stitched as you can see above. It contains 18 poems, if you count the dedication and coda pieces, which I do. And they are little gems, these 18 poems. As an example:



Cicadas
cling 
to what

there is
to 
cling to too



There's that mystery, right out of the gate. The final "too" breaks through to where the poem was destined to go, in the process carrying the full weight of its meaning. I thought immediately of Master Bashō's poem about a cricket:


How solitary it is!
Hanging on a nail -
a cricket


And another from Cid:


Shaken
is the bell of silence

Transparent
body
transparent

emptiness
listening
unquenched



Each word, precisely chosen, precisely placed.  Precise.

Here is a little something a bit unusual for Cid, and beautiful:


Beautiflies
and bizzies
making their

curious
approaches
to what stands

up to them
as part of
their pursuit


No, those aren't typos in the 1st and 2nd lines. No typos at all.


From bamboo
flask into
bamboo cup

emptiness
the source of
drunkenness


Though this has little to do with haiku and syllable count, if you look (and listen) closely you will see that Cid's precision is not by any means limited to meaning and particular word selection.

I believe you've got it now. My friends at Caliban are special. A tip o' the hat their way. 

Though a limited edition, as mentioned above, there are 9 copies available through abebooks, most of them in fine condition, ranging with shipping from 13 to 40 dollars, all waiting like a beautifly to settle perfectly in the palm of your hand. There's a couple available via amazon, too, but not in as good a condition, so I'll let you find them yourself.


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on the flower pot
does the butterfly, too

hear Buddha's promise?
Issa
trans. by David G. Lanoue


best,
Don

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