Showing posts with label Joseph Hutchison. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Joseph Hutchison. Show all posts

Friday, October 21, 2011

3 Poems: Rengetsu, Merwin, and Charles Wright



What follows are three poems that somehow this week all gathered themselves around my feet, so many wind-blown leaves. They seem all to have the same tinge of color, or fragile tactility, or perhaps epistemology. Maybe, just maybe, the randomness of this gathering is the filter of the consciousness that attracted them or was attracted to them.

Maybe not.



Separation
   Your absence has gone through me 
   Like thread through a needle
   Everything I do is stitched with its color.
                                                               W. S. Merwin
 






Self-Portrait in 2035
   The root becomes him, the road ruts
   That are sift and grain in the powderlight
   Recast him, sink bone in him
   Blanket and creep up, fine, fine:

   Worm-waste and pillow tick; hair
   Prickly and dust-dangled, his arms and black shoes
   Unlinked and laceless, his face false
   In the wood-rot, and past pause . . .

   Darkness, erase these lines, forget these words.
   Spider recite his one sin

                                       Charles Wright






Mountain Falling Flowers
   We accept the graceful falling
   Of mountain cherry blossoms,
   But it is much harder for us
   To fall away from our own
   Attachment to this world.
                                                              Rengetsu
                                                              translated by John Stevens





The Merwin was sent along by a friend who knows how much I cherish Merwins's most recent book, The Shadows of Sirius.   It is the second time in recent weeks I've delved into China Trace, Charles Wright's early 1977 collection, prompted by his sensational recent volume, Sestets.   The Rengetsu, which comes from the book Lotus Moon (recently republished by White Pine Press) was a library gifting from still another friend, who brought it to my attention.  I, of course, snapped it up upon its return to said library.

I'm rich in friends as well as poetry.

Over the last month or so, I've been trying to find the time to write about a little collection of Kenneth Rexroth's entitled Sky Sea Birds Trees Earth House Beasts Flowers.  I'll get there one of these days, along with perhaps an overview of Sestets, which I was so completely taken with that I returned the library copy I'd taken out and bought one of my own.

So why these poems?

With the Merwin poem, the first two lines seem commonplace, almost pedestrian, than he wacks you over the head with the iron skillet of a third line ... no, let me try that again.  With the Merwin poem, the first two lines are commonplace, almost pedestrian, than he seduces you smoothly with a touch of warm breath behind the ear.

That's better. 

If the thread, pardon my borrowing, that binds these three works together is loss, it is Wright's poem that does the mixed-metaphoric slamming.   What comes to mind for me is, when we speak of loss, can death be far behind? No, I think not.  Death is the off stage character here, though in Wright's case maybe not so off stage as come and gone.  Rengetsu's poem is another kind of seduction, reminding us of the first two Noble Truths and how very difficult they are to surmount.

All of this and not a haiku in sight!  The Rengetsu is a waka, so that will do nicely as a distant cousin. 


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This week's poem from the Lilliput Review archive comes from #180.  The poem, Earth-Poet, is by the wonderful Joseph Hutchinson, whose blog, "Perpetual Bird," keeps many a reader on their toes, lyrical or otherwise.  Enjoy.






The Earth-Boat
  The ocean's susurrus....
  In its sun-soaked pod the brain
  ripens.  The Earth-boat:
  for a few breaths
  we can feel it drifting.
Joseph Hutchison








hey boatman
no pissing on the moon
in the waves!
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue











best,
Don




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Friday, January 1, 2010

New Year's Haiku/Tanka Challenge Winners



Thanks very much to all for sending along poems with barely 12 hours of open reading time, on New Year's Eve to boot. The winning poem (haiku) is



Snow blurs tracks
From year
Just past
Russell Libby






And here are 3 runners-up ...




New Year’s Day —

the wreath has fallen

between the doors
Scott Metz






end of the year--
not enough fingers and toes
to count my blessings
Karma Tenzing Wangchuk








ashes, few embers—
enough for a fresh fire though
this New Year’s morning
Joseph Hutchison




Once again, my sincere thanks to all who sent work along. It was all solid and a nice way for me to start the new year.

Happy New Year to all.

And from Issa, a reminder: Edo is the ancient name for Tokyo, but we all may fill in the name of our own town ...




homeless, too
seeing in the new year
in Edo
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue




best,
Don

Sunday, December 13, 2009

Best Poetry Blogs: A Baker's Dozen



Some news on the home front: Lilliput Review is one of 13 blogs featured in the Suite 101 article Best Poetry Blogs: A Baker's Dozen by Joseph Hutchison. I am quite humbled to be in such fine company and tip my hat to Mr. Hutchison for his recommendation. Suite 101 is a resource I've used countless times while researching poetry, both for this blog and for work at my daytime job, so it's a real honor.


The article begins:

The Web offers terrific resources for poets, and among the most useful are poetry blogs. They address a need that all poets have for a circle of like-minded people devoted to sharing their knowledge and passion about poetry. This is especially important for poets whose local communities don’t offer poetry groups and for poets who can’t afford the hefty cost of an MFA program. Poetry blogs help readers keep up on new publications, issues of craft, poetic trends, and strategies for dealing with ...


For the rest, head on over to Suite 101





a soot-covered doll
but displayed in the seat
of honor
Issa
translated by David G. Lanoue




best,
Don