Wednesday, August 10, 2011

Wednesday Haiku, #30: Susan Diridoni

Wednesday Haiku, Week #30

lilac creek trilling all the hours
          Susan Diridoni

downstream, the gate
to knowledge...
evening's red leaves
translated by David G. Lanoue


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Charles Gramlich said...

"Trilling" is such a great word.

Peter Greene said...

Like that, about the creek. Very fine. Exactly what it's doing. Sky Crick here goes more "borluka borluka borluka" at this time, less trilly, more clonkish and frogs.

Thanks for the lovely poems, guys.


Issa's Untidy Hut said...

Charles, something about all those Ls in trilling and lilacs ... Don

Issa's Untidy Hut said...

Old 333 ...

borluka, borluka, borluka ... you should be writing for the Sky Crick Chamber of Commerece.

Thanks for the kind words.